Authored by: Anonymous on Tuesday, December 25 2012 @ 02:14 pm UTC

Wow. I liked this one. It story picked up speed like a train. I felt her fear and the man's anger. I loved how she dcseribed her frustation. I've been there!It was interesting that I could tell the time period. It didn't really bother me, but it felt older than current. I enjoyed reading this story. Remember, you can always correct grammar, but you can't always capture the feeling, mood and voice of a story. You did well with all of these:~)

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