Authored by: Anonymous on Tuesday, December 25 2012 @ 02:41 pm UTC

So glad you linked up with us! I like that this was a very short scene - but pceakd with emotion.There were some grammatical issues but none that really took away from the story. Interesting that it was a brother and not a boyfriend or husband.One thing to consider is the font of your blog - I found it tough to read, and to tell where paragraphs started or ended. I usually leave a line in between each graf so you know where the breaks are. But that's just my opinion, just something to think about! ;)

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